Re: Jack opened his eyes. A thirtyish woman was sleeping next to him

Originally Posted by
alpacinoutd
Is this correct and natural?
Jack opened his eyes. A thirtyish-year-old woman was sleeping next to him, her dark hair sprawled across the pillow, a riot of loose strands. She rolled over and her unfocused and somewhat confused eyes met his. Her gaze drifted from Jack's eyes to the pale blue blinds. The winter morning was bleeding through holes in the curtains.
See above. I'd probably say "A woman of about thirty ...".
Look at the last two sentences. Does the window have blinds or curtains?
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.