alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
John looked out the window. The land outside was shrouded/cloaked in spring, the flowers mingling to form a blaze of color. She opened the door and shuffled across the room to look out the window too. John could feel her sensual warmth seeping into his body. He felt the hairs in the back of his neck rise as she got closer. There was something evil about her.
John looked out the window. The land outside was shrouded/cloaked in spring, the flowers mingling to form a blaze of color. She opened the door and shuffled across the room to look out the window too. John could feel her sensual warmth seeping into his body. He felt the hairs in the back of his neck rise as she got closer. There was something evil about her.