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    As discussed, I spoke to him about the technical licence, He agreed and ready to apply for it if the required documents and registration fees are provided by our company; otherwise, he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company. / He confirms that he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company if we can't provide required documents and bear the expenses.

    As I understand from him, the office concerned had suspended the technical test due to pandemic last year. There is theoretical and practical test for this licence. Once we approach the office only we come to know that the test schedule and other further details.

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    Re: Licence

    What is your question? Is this something you wrote?
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    Re: Licence

    You have problems with punctuation and word choice.
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    Re: Licence

    Thank you for your help on this. I tried to reword my sentences. Please check and advise me if they are worded correctly.

    As discussed, I spoke to him about the technical licence. He agreed and ready to apply for it if the required documents and registration fees are provided by our company; otherwise, he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company. or He confirms that he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company if we can't provide the required documents and bear the cost.

    As I understand from him, the office concerned had suspended the technical test due to pandemic last year. There is theoretical and practical test for this licence. Once we approach the office only then we know the test schedule and other further details.

    Once again, thank you
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    Re: Licence

    Always post your own sentences for correction here in Editing & Writing Topics, please.

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    Re: Licence

    Who agreed to what?
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    Re: Licence

    Thank you all. I tried to correct my sentences. Please check and advise me if they are worded correctly.


    As discussed, I spoke to Sabian about the technical licence last week. Sabian agreed and ready to apply for the lience , but the cost and the documents will be provided by the company. Sabian confirms that he can't accept our offer unless we bear the expenses for the licence..
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    I tried to reword my sentences.

    Please don't use "tried" that way.
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    Re: Licence

    Quote Originally Posted by MAJSH View Post

    As discussed, I spoke to him about the technical licence. He agreed and ready to apply for it if the required documents and registration fees are provided by our company; otherwise, he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company. or He confirms that he will not accept our offer and he'll continue with the same company if we can't provide the required documents and bear the cost.
    You seem to be either using too many words or not enough. Who did you discuss it with?

    Your sentences are too long.

    Don't capitalize he in the middle of a sentence unless you are referring to the Deity.

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    Re: Licence

    Get to the point, but even more important than brevity is clarity. Who are you talking about? I suggest that you use the person"s name. Perhaps:

    I talked to Bob about this ....

    You seem to be using certain words or phrases just because you think they are expected.
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