Is this correct and natural?

That was Jasmine's childhood. Her parents didn't want a daughter. Her father, a puritanical and austere man, would beat her each time he caught her practicing ballet. She got married to escape home but with each passing day realized she had made a mistake. Her husband turned out to be as priggish and violent. With her husband's first beating, she was back home. Her suppressed memories bubbled up. She could almost sense her father's heavy hand on her cheek again.