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- Jan 17, 2016
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- English Teacher
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Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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It wasn’t long before Meili was happily laughing on Moogh’s back with Suxin likewise behind her. By the time they reach the mountain top, the sun was getting low, but Yang called for a rest stop. Moogh was getting older, and he didn’t want his friend to suffer. They were soon on their way again, and now that Lanhua had seen the dream scene completed, she suggested they get moving.
On their way down the trail, she spoke softly to her brother. “Maybe it’s just the difference between dream and reality, but those meteoroids look a lot closer than they did in my dream. As soon as we get off the mountain, I suggest we quicken our pace a little, just in case.”
Lanhua’s slight trepidation took form when they were about two-thirds of the way back; she heard it first, an almost imperceptible deep rumbling sound. “It’s coming now!” She said.
Yang told the girls to lie low on Moogh’s back and hang on as tightly as they could, then he slapped Moogh’s rump. “To the cave, Moogh, take the girls to the cave.”
Moogh did not need to be told twice; he took off running at a gallop, a fast but rhythmic pace so that the girls wouldn’t fall. Meili screamed, and Suxin laughed with joy. Yang and Lanhua followed, running close behind. The rumbling sound was now a roar that filled their ears and their hearts.
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It wasn’t long before Meili was happily laughing on Moogh’s back with Suxin likewise behind her. By the time they reach the mountain top, the sun was getting low, but Yang called for a rest stop. Moogh was getting older, and he didn’t want his friend to suffer. They were soon on their way again, and now that Lanhua had seen the dream scene completed, she suggested they get moving.
On their way down the trail, she spoke softly to her brother. “Maybe it’s just the difference between dream and reality, but those meteoroids look a lot closer than they did in my dream. As soon as we get off the mountain, I suggest we quicken our pace a little, just in case.”
Lanhua’s slight trepidation took form when they were about two-thirds of the way back; she heard it first, an almost imperceptible deep rumbling sound. “It’s coming now!” She said.
Yang told the girls to lie low on Moogh’s back and hang on as tightly as they could, then he slapped Moogh’s rump. “To the cave, Moogh, take the girls to the cave.”
Moogh did not need to be told twice; he took off running at a gallop, a fast but rhythmic pace so that the girls wouldn’t fall. Meili screamed, and Suxin laughed with joy. Yang and Lanhua followed, running close behind. The rumbling sound was now a roar that filled their ears and their hearts.