[Essay] Love is like Death

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zia uddin

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There was a warrior in Qai Qabila his name was Bumsi. He was very brave and he was friends of friends and an enemy of enemies.He ate a lot of food.If any one him for love ,he would get angry. The days went by so on.And one day Bumsi fell in love....

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What happened to him i will tell you next time ...



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Welcome to the forum.

Please repost your text without trying to change the colour and without leaving wide open spaces in it.
 
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There was a warrior in Qai Qabila. His name was Bumsi. He was very brave, and he was a friend of friends and an enemy of enemies. [space] He ate a lot of food. [space] If anyone him for love, he would get angry.

That sentence does not make sense.

The days went by [STRIKE]so on[/STRIKE]. [space] And one day Bumsi fell in love....
Welcome, Zia!

None of your images or colors work.

Spaces go after periods and commas. They do not go before periods or commas.
 
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