alpacinou
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I'm trying to describe a situation when a person looks into the mirror and they have a fake smile.
How can I express it? How can I improve this?
Her days were characterized by lethargy. She didn't feel anything except a vague pain shooting up and down her right leg. A part of her was happy about a pain. At least she felt something in her desolate existence. The pain scorched through her body as she was washing her face in the bathroom. She stared into the mirror, her empty blue eyes gazing back. She had a fake smile, looking at her teeth for a few seconds. She was pushing herself to the limits of her sanity.
How can I express it? How can I improve this?
Her days were characterized by lethargy. She didn't feel anything except a vague pain shooting up and down her right leg. A part of her was happy about a pain. At least she felt something in her desolate existence. The pain scorched through her body as she was washing her face in the bathroom. She stared into the mirror, her empty blue eyes gazing back. She had a fake smile, looking at her teeth for a few seconds. She was pushing herself to the limits of her sanity.