alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
An asphalt road snaked around the mountain. After hiking for around 30 minutes, we arrived at a vast flat area overlooking the city. There were benches there and other hikers were resting on them. We turned left and found refuge behind a massive boulder on the slope which was scattered with trees. The drone of the city disappeared. We could only hear the wind rustling down the mountain.
An asphalt road snaked around the mountain. After hiking for around 30 minutes, we arrived at a vast flat area overlooking the city. There were benches there and other hikers were resting on them. We turned left and found refuge behind a massive boulder on the slope which was scattered with trees. The drone of the city disappeared. We could only hear the wind rustling down the mountain.