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    correspondence Letter need to correct

    Dear Sir ,


    Greetings from A company , we has known that you are the Market Area manager for B , Our range area is Dermatology and Plastic surgery and we are interested at C Machine .


    We would like to ask you if you are looking for distributor in D ?


    Appreciate your reply .


    Thanks & regards

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    Re: correspondence Letter need to correct

    Quote Originally Posted by kouzbari View Post
    Dear Sir,

    Greetings from A I am writing to you on behalf of [company name]. we has known I am aware that you are the Market Area manager for B. Our range area is dermatology and plastic surgery, and we are interested at in [name of machine].

    We I would like to ask you if you are looking for a distributor in D?

    Appreciate I look forward to your reply.

    Thanks & regards Yours faithfully

    Your name
    Welcome to the forum.

    Please note my corrections above. You need to concentrate on the spacing around punctuation. We do not put a space before a comma, a full stop or a question mark.
    What is supposed to go where you have written "B" and "D"?
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 16-Apr-2021 at 16:40.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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