[General] The parking space is in open air.

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I am in a resort and my friend wanted to meet me here then I sent him an address and told him that when he saw a parking space he could phone me.

He thought the parking place was an underground one and I said to him "The parking place is in open air and very easy to see".

Is my italic sentence natural?
 

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I am [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at a resort and my friend wanted to meet me. [STRIKE]here then[/STRIKE] I sent him an address and told him that when he saw a parking space he [STRIKE]could[/STRIKE] should phone me.

He thought the parking place was [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] underground [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] and I said to him "The parking place is in the open air and very easy to see".

Is my italic sentence natural?

See above.

1. A resort is simply a place that people go on holiday. I don't see how it has any relevance to this context. All you needed to tell us was that you were trying to meet a friend and needed to give him some directions.

2. A parking space is an area of tarmac roughly the size of a car.

3. What's a parking place?

I have a feeling you should have used "car park" (BrE) or "parking lot" (AmE) each time.
 

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Yes, it should be "a parking lot". Sorry, I was having a brain fart. Thank you so much for tell me its BE version, which I didn't know before.

Is my new sentence natural?

The parking lot/car park is in the open air and very easy to see.


But how about the following one?

The parking lot/car park is in the open air and very easy to be seen.
 

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I don't really find "in the open air" appropriate for the context. Once he said he thought it was an underground car park, you just need to say something like "No, it's outdoors. You can't miss it!"
 

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Is my new sentence natural?

The parking lot/car park is in the open air and very easy to see.
That's okay, but not very natural. See below.

The parking lot/car park is in the open air and very easy to be seen.
That's not natural.

Note that a parking lot is, by definition, in the open air. Otherwise it's a parking garage (in American English). Therefore your sentence is tautologous.
 

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"Parking place" and "parking space" are about equally common where I live, but both are less used than "parking spot".
 
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