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    alpacinoutd is offline Key Member
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    The CEO is the physical embodiment

    Are these correct and natural?

    1. The CEO is the physical embodiment of the corporation he heads: infinitely greedy, ruthlessly efficient and aggressive.

    2. This politician is the physical embodiment of the regime that has brought him to power: vicious, indiscriminate, full of hate. He is that regime in the flesh.

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    Re: The CEO is the physical embodiment

    The writing is fine, but remember that CEOs and politicians can be men or women. So fix those errors.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: The CEO is the physical embodiment

    I don't think corporations can be greedy, but you should feel free to disagree with me.
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