The CEO is the physical embodiment

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alpacinou

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Are these correct and natural?

1. The CEO is the physical embodiment of the corporation he heads: infinitely greedy, ruthlessly efficient and aggressive.

2. This politician is the physical embodiment of the regime that has brought him to power: vicious, indiscriminate, full of hate. He is that regime in the flesh.
 

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The writing is fine, but remember that CEOs and politicians can be men or women. So fix those errors.
 

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I don't think corporations can be greedy, but you should feel free to disagree with me.
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