Reply With QuoteThe writing is fine, but remember that CEOs and politicians can be men or women. So fix those errors.
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01-Mar-2021, 22:03 #1
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The CEO is the physical embodiment
Are these correct and natural?
1. The CEO is the physical embodiment of the corporation he heads: infinitely greedy, ruthlessly efficient and aggressive.
2. This politician is the physical embodiment of the regime that has brought him to power: vicious, indiscriminate, full of hate. He is that regime in the flesh.
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02-Mar-2021, 16:13 #2
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Re: The CEO is the physical embodiment
I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.
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02-Mar-2021, 21:23 #3
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Re: The CEO is the physical embodiment
I don't think corporations can be greedy, but you should feel free to disagree with me.
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