Re: The weather was really polluted that week.

Originally Posted by
alpacinoutd
Is this correct and natural?
The air was really polluted that week. The sun gave off a ghostly glow amid the smog. As I walked home, bitter-tasting smoke coated my mouth.
It is now!
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