alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
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- Iran
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John leaned back on his chair, stretching his hands. He then grabbed his iPhone. As he was texting, the door opened and a bunch of his colleagues came in one after another screaming and singing. Nicole was swirling a medium-sized cake, topped by sparklers. "Happy birthday John!," she said kissing his cheek. John stared at the sparklers slowly burning, splashing sparks. His eyes rested on the number on the cake. He sank into a reverie. When did I get so old? Even his crush, Nicole had aged, crow feet around her tired eyes. John had never found the courage to tell her about his feelings for her. He began to feel it that day. Feel the hours, the days slipping out of his hand, escaping. I'm past a point where making the most of life would matter, he thought. Nicole shook his shoulders, pulling him out of his reverie. "Make a wish grandpa," she said, wrapping her arms around him. I'm old enough to be a grandpa, except and I don't have a wife or a family.
John leaned back on his chair, stretching his hands. He then grabbed his iPhone. As he was texting, the door opened and a bunch of his colleagues came in one after another screaming and singing. Nicole was swirling a medium-sized cake, topped by sparklers. "Happy birthday John!," she said kissing his cheek. John stared at the sparklers slowly burning, splashing sparks. His eyes rested on the number on the cake. He sank into a reverie. When did I get so old? Even his crush, Nicole had aged, crow feet around her tired eyes. John had never found the courage to tell her about his feelings for her. He began to feel it that day. Feel the hours, the days slipping out of his hand, escaping. I'm past a point where making the most of life would matter, he thought. Nicole shook his shoulders, pulling him out of his reverie. "Make a wish grandpa," she said, wrapping her arms around him. I'm old enough to be a grandpa, except and I don't have a wife or a family.