alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
I trudged in the plain, the only sound in the world the crunching of my own feet. A blustery, chilling wind dragged dark gray clouds from behind the mountains in the distance. It began to snow. Big, thin flakes swirled in the air as if they were flying ash from a volcano. The thought of a volcano warmed my heart as the snow covered the ground, covering its scars.
I trudged in the plain, the only sound in the world the crunching of my own feet. A blustery, chilling wind dragged dark gray clouds from behind the mountains in the distance. It began to snow. Big, thin flakes swirled in the air as if they were flying ash from a volcano. The thought of a volcano warmed my heart as the snow covered the ground, covering its scars.