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Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
In the end, Jingying did what she normally did. She came right out and said what was on her mind. “Gan, I’m pregnant.”
Gan just stopped, looked at her, and, seeing that she was serious, he smiled. “Well, that is unexpected. It’s not even my birthday”. Gan took her by the hand and pulled her to him, hugging her. No words were spoken, nor were any needed.
Several weeks later, the forest thinned and was gone. Before them was a sandy plain beyond which was a mountain range. Gan stopped and took in the view.Jingying was by his side holding his hand. “We’re home Gan, I wonder what we’ll find.”
Gan’s emotions were mixed. He wasn’t sure how he felt. “Father's plan was to destroy the city. I don’t know what to expect. It’s been so long though, my guess is that there's nothing left. Come on, let’s keep going. We should be able to make it to the cave before dark.”
In the end, Jingying did what she normally did. She came right out and said what was on her mind. “Gan, I’m pregnant.”
Gan just stopped, looked at her, and, seeing that she was serious, he smiled. “Well, that is unexpected. It’s not even my birthday”. Gan took her by the hand and pulled her to him, hugging her. No words were spoken, nor were any needed.
Several weeks later, the forest thinned and was gone. Before them was a sandy plain beyond which was a mountain range. Gan stopped and took in the view.Jingying was by his side holding his hand. “We’re home Gan, I wonder what we’ll find.”
Gan’s emotions were mixed. He wasn’t sure how he felt. “Father's plan was to destroy the city. I don’t know what to expect. It’s been so long though, my guess is that there's nothing left. Come on, let’s keep going. We should be able to make it to the cave before dark.”
