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    Hey guys,
    That would be so generous of you guys if you help me to send an effective email to professors, my goal universities are Yale and UCLA
    Also, I need an interesting subject for email

    " Dr. XXXX,
    I am in my third year of Bachelor of Medical Laboratory Science at the XXX University of Medical Science in Iran, I am applying to the MS in Immunology program, and I am very interested in your work. After glancing at a few of your recent papers and your research summary I find your work with autoimmune and inflammatory diseases very interesting. Will you be taking on new students next year? If I am invited to interview, is there any way you will be able to meet with me? As a determined student, I would like to prove my strength by having a presentation of any article that you recommend.
    I have an excellent medical education and an extensive training in laboratory tests. My aim is to gain comprehensive and in-depth training in fundamental and clinical immunology from world’s leading immunologists at the University of Harvard as well as to have hands-on experience on research in cancer immunotherapy. This education will enable me to work innovatively on research in cancer immunotherapy for my doctoral. Therefore, this Master’s program is an important step for my ambition to be an excellent scientist and entrepreneur in cancer immunotherapy.
    I have read several research projects as an undergraduate in rheumatoid arthritis and cancer. Also, currently, I’m trying to prepare a review with this main title: The role of NK cells in autoimmune diseases which contains disease like MS, Rheumatoid arthritis, Primary Sjogren Syndrome, Systemic lupus erythematosus, and type I diabetes.
    Please find my CV attached.
    Thank you for your time, looking forwards to your reply

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    Re: An Email for a professor

    Quote Originally Posted by Venus_hsv View Post
    Hey. guys, We are not all men here.

    That It would be so very generous of you guys if you could help me to send write an effective email to some professors. My goal universities are Yale and UCLA.

    Also, I need an interesting subject title (or "subject line") for my email.

    "Dear Dr. XXXX,

    I am in my third year of my/a Bachelor of Medical Laboratory Science at the XXX University of Medical Science in Iran. I am applying to the MS in Immunology program, and I am very interested in your work. After glancing at I have read a few of your recent papers and your research summary, and I find your work with autoimmune and inflammatory diseases very interesting. Will I would like to know if you will be taking on new students next year. If so, and if I am invited to interview, is there any way would you will be able willing to meet with me? As a determined student, I would like to prove demonstrate my strengths by having delivering a presentation of on any article that you recommend.

    I have an excellent medical education and an extensive training in laboratory tests. My aim is to gain comprehensive and in-depth training in fundamental and clinical immunology from the world’s leading immunologists at the University of Harvard as well as to have hands-on experience on in/on/with research in cancer immunotherapy. This education will enable me to work innovatively on research in cancer immunotherapy for my doctoral. Therefore, This Master’s program is an important step for towards achieving my ambition to be goal of becoming an excellent scientist and entrepreneur in cancer immunotherapy.

    As an undergraduate, I have read several research projects as an undergraduate in rheumatoid arthritis and cancer. Also, currently, I’m currently trying to preparing a review with this main title: titled "The Role of NK Cells in Autoimmune Diseases". which contains This includes diseases like MS, rheumatoid arthritis, primary Sjogren's syndrome, systemic lupus erythematosus, and type I diabetes.

    Please find my CV attached.

    Thank you for your time. I looking look forwards forward to your reply.
    See above.

    I'm not convinced that "entrepreneur" is the word you need.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: An Email for a professor

    Yeah true, I was just trying to...idk... cause I should show them that I am gonna be useful for both my application and visa
    Thank you so so so much *_* idk how to thank you but I'll wish the best for your life

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    Re: An Email for a professor

    Also, when I said "guys" I meant everyone
    I don't know but you telling me whenever I'm gonna say "hey guys" it means that I'm saying hi only to men? Men can also refer to human. right?

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    Re: An Email for a professor

    Quote Originally Posted by Venus_hsv View Post
    Yeah Yes, that's true. I was just trying to ...idk... cause I should show them that I am gonna going to be useful, which will help with for both my application and my visa.

    Thank you so, so, so much.

    *_* Don't try to make your own emoticons.

    idk I don't know how to thank you but I'll wish the best for your life.
    Note my corrections above. We discourage the use of all non-standard English on the forum: yeah/gonna/idk. You must remember to end every sentence with an appropriate punctuation mark. You have a habit of omitting full stops.

    Have you come up with an alternative to "entrepreneur" yet?
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    Re: An Email for a professor

    Quote Originally Posted by Venus_hsv View Post
    Also, When I said "guys", I meant everyone.
    I don't know but are you telling me that whenever I'm gonna I say "Hey guys", it means that I'm saying hi only to men? "Men" can also refer to mean "humans", right?
    Note my corrections above.

    Some people will accept the use of "guys" when talking to groups of mixed sexes and some won't. We advise learners to avoid using it unless they're with a group of relatively close friends who will be happy with the term.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: An Email for a professor

    No, not yet.
    Can you please help me with that?
    And I noticed I have so many mistakes in any sentence I type. But I look forward to fix that.

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