alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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John decided to walk to the supermarket to buy cigarettes. His house was at the end of the alley and the store was at tip of the alley. The neighborhood was quiet, except for the whir of air-conditioner engines rumbling in the muggy summer air. Hot jets of air radiated off the tired engines. Halos of light formed around streetlights glowing in the night. The smell of opium mingled with the smell of burned garbage, filling John's noise. The alley was littered with syringes used for heroin injections by the neighborhood's junkies.
John decided to walk to the supermarket to buy cigarettes. His house was at the end of the alley and the store was at tip of the alley. The neighborhood was quiet, except for the whir of air-conditioner engines rumbling in the muggy summer air. Hot jets of air radiated off the tired engines. Halos of light formed around streetlights glowing in the night. The smell of opium mingled with the smell of burned garbage, filling John's noise. The alley was littered with syringes used for heroin injections by the neighborhood's junkies.