rodgers white
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Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Dylan had answered the big question. Is it possible to create a wormhole? Not just mathematically. Mathematically it had been possible for decades but not in reality. The thing that no one would find easy to believe was that he had done it using a minuscule amount of energy, no blackhole needed.
However, now there were many more questions to answer; first, from a technical perspective, how to stabilise it. The question that filled Dylan's mind, though, was. What the hell happened to the almost nine point five centimetre part of the pencil? Could some child in a parallel universe be wondering from where the extra pencil had come?
Dylan increased the power, hoping it would increase the stability of the wormhole. There was no noticeable change, or at least he thought not. Dylan changed other parameters to open the exit vortex at different distances, but no, the collapse was still at 3.9 seconds. He built tiny probes, twenty-three millimetres in diameter, to record information and sent them through, nothing, no, not nothing.
The sensors were limited, but Dylan had synchronised their clocks to 30 decimal places. Each probe that had passed through was now out of sync by minus point five seconds. He did not know what this meant though he had a few ideas. Dylan realised he needed to construct a new device that could accommodate a more preponderant set of sensors.
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Dylan had answered the big question. Is it possible to create a wormhole? Not just mathematically. Mathematically it had been possible for decades but not in reality. The thing that no one would find easy to believe was that he had done it using a minuscule amount of energy, no blackhole needed.
However, now there were many more questions to answer; first, from a technical perspective, how to stabilise it. The question that filled Dylan's mind, though, was. What the hell happened to the almost nine point five centimetre part of the pencil? Could some child in a parallel universe be wondering from where the extra pencil had come?
Dylan increased the power, hoping it would increase the stability of the wormhole. There was no noticeable change, or at least he thought not. Dylan changed other parameters to open the exit vortex at different distances, but no, the collapse was still at 3.9 seconds. He built tiny probes, twenty-three millimetres in diameter, to record information and sent them through, nothing, no, not nothing.
The sensors were limited, but Dylan had synchronised their clocks to 30 decimal places. Each probe that had passed through was now out of sync by minus point five seconds. He did not know what this meant though he had a few ideas. Dylan realised he needed to construct a new device that could accommodate a more preponderant set of sensors.
