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    Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    I was struggling to make the following sentence grammatically correct. I could not be successful in making it grammatically correct with right wordings. I need your help please.

    It was good to know from you the vision of the University that this University wants his students to be ethical also. Sir, If this University produces good skilled Engineers, Economists etc. who are ethical also, it would be a remarkable achievement for this University. I am keen to know do you have any system or a curriculum or teaching pedagogy in place so that when students passed out from this University, they are ethical also.

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    Who are you writing this to, and why are you writing it?

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    Quote Originally Posted by rajan View Post
    I was am struggling to make the following sentence grammatically correct. I could not be successful in making can't make it grammatically correct with right wordings and I'm not sure about the wording. I need your help please.
    Note my corrections above. We can help you further when you answer the questions in post #2.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    During an induction program, the Vice Chancellor of a University was telling his University's vision to new joiners over zoom meeting. I got the chance to listen it. Now today is our group's turn to attend it. At the end of the meeting, each joiner will be given a chance to ask a question. The vision will remain same. I didn't want to tell the reason so I didn't write it in my first post.
    Last edited by rajan; 04-May-2021 at 01:32.

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    Quote Originally Posted by rajan View Post
    During an induction program, the vice chancellor of a university was describing his university's vision to new students over a Zoom meeting. I got the chance to listen to it. Now today is our group's turn to attend it. At the end of the meeting, each new student will be given a chance to ask a question. The vision will remain same. I didn't want to say the reason, so I didn't write it in my first post.
    Capitalize all proper nouns. Only capitalize common nouns when they start sentences.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    Quote Originally Posted by rajan View Post
    I was struggling to make the following sentence grammatically correct. I could not be successful in making it grammatically correct with right wordings. I need your help please.

    It was good to learn from you the vision of the university: that this university wants its students to be ethical also. Sir, if this university produces good skilled engineers, economists, etc., who are also ethical also, it would be a remarkable achievement for this University. I am keen to know: Do you have any system or a curriculum or teaching pedagogy in place so that when students graduate from this university, they are ethical, also?
    You're asking the chancellor an interesting question. A school can teach ethics, but it can't force its graduates to be ethical.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: Vision / Ethical / curriculum

    How about too instead of also?

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