alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
John kept driving on the main highway until he turned to a side road flanked by a narrow water canal on the right and a neck-high concrete wall on the left. Heat waves rippled and shimmered on the battered asphalt. In a futile attempt to escape the sun beams shining into his eyes, he put down the visor but the rays of the merciless July sun bounced off the water, creeping inside his car from all directions. He felt he was inside a furnace. If only I could have a car with a decent air conditioner. He fished out a piece of tissue from inside the glove compartment and wiped sweat off his forehead. The world outside the car appeared as if I was melting.
John kept driving on the main highway until he turned to a side road flanked by a narrow water canal on the right and a neck-high concrete wall on the left. Heat waves rippled and shimmered on the battered asphalt. In a futile attempt to escape the sun beams shining into his eyes, he put down the visor but the rays of the merciless July sun bounced off the water, creeping inside his car from all directions. He felt he was inside a furnace. If only I could have a car with a decent air conditioner. He fished out a piece of tissue from inside the glove compartment and wiped sweat off his forehead. The world outside the car appeared as if I was melting.