alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
Jane went for a walk in the garden. A warm wind was swaying the trees and hot jets of air were swirling in the garden. Sweat dappled her T-shirt as she walked on. The mulberry trees appeared as if they were sweating in the heat too. The ground was lined with furrows which were littered with dead leaves and decaying mulberries. She heard an engine sputter to life in the corner of the garden, a water pump. Several minutes later, water reached the furrow to her right, gently nudging the dead leaves which made a faint crackling sound as they moved. The sun was glaring down, its rays bouncing off the streaming water of the furrows, painting her hair with a golden gleam. She stepped towards the room in the corner that housed the water pump. Its window was streaked with soot. The air around the small building was filled with the stench of fuel and the racket of the engine nearly deafened her.
Jane went for a walk in the garden. A warm wind was swaying the trees and hot jets of air were swirling in the garden. Sweat dappled her T-shirt as she walked on. The mulberry trees appeared as if they were sweating in the heat too. The ground was lined with furrows which were littered with dead leaves and decaying mulberries. She heard an engine sputter to life in the corner of the garden, a water pump. Several minutes later, water reached the furrow to her right, gently nudging the dead leaves which made a faint crackling sound as they moved. The sun was glaring down, its rays bouncing off the streaming water of the furrows, painting her hair with a golden gleam. She stepped towards the room in the corner that housed the water pump. Its window was streaked with soot. The air around the small building was filled with the stench of fuel and the racket of the engine nearly deafened her.