when light passes through the clouds

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alpacinou

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I want to express the idea that light passes through the clouds. Are these correct and natural?

1. Faint sunlight leaked through puffy clouds, painting the mountains with a copper gleam.
2. Dim moonlight streamed through the clouds, casting a pale hazy orange over the hills.
3. The rays of a setting sun spilled from above the clouds, bathing the sky in a hazy pinkish glimmer.
4. Sunlight bled through the clouds, and the sky was wrapped in its hazy light.
 
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Charlie Bernstein

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I want to express the idea that light passes through the clouds. Are these correct and natural?

1. Faint sunlight filtered through puffy clouds, painting the mountains with a copper gleam.
2. Dim moonlight streamed through the clouds, casting a pale hazy orange over the hills.
3. The rays of a setting sun spilled through the clouds, bathing the sky in a hazy pinkish glimmer.
4. Sunlight bled through the clouds, and the sky was wrapped in its hazy light.

Bled is odd, but in the right context it can work.
 
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