kaptansari
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- Jun 7, 2021
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- Turkish
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- Turkey
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- Turkey
Hello everyone , I would like to get your help and advice to correct the errors in this letter. Thank you so much.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for the M.Sc. program in [XXXX] at the [XXXX] starting October 2021. I do truly believe that my qualifications will fulfill the requirements of this program.
First, I would like to introduce myself. My name is [XXX]. I graduated from [XXX] in July 2020 and I have a bachelors degree in Electrical Electronics Engineering. I have been working in [XXX] for 10 months.
After my undergraduate education, my ambition is to get further education but due to pandemic conditions, I postponed my abroad master degree plans and found a job. Now, pandemic conditions are getting better so I strongly believe it is a correct time to take a break from my business career and get the education that I always wanted.
I chose the Energy option as my core specialization in my undergraduate education. The courses that I took during my undergraduate education and also my final year project are completely related with these courses that will be given in this program. I would like to learn more about [XXX] and I believe this program offers best chances for me to improve myself.
In addition to my information which I have shared above, please consider my transcript and resume that I have uploaded for the application.
Thank you very much and I am looking forward to getting positive respond from you and be valuable addition in this program.
Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for the M.Sc. program in [XXXX] at the [XXXX] starting October 2021. I do truly believe that my qualifications will fulfill the requirements of this program.
First, I would like to introduce myself. My name is [XXX]. I graduated from [XXX] in July 2020 and I have a bachelors degree in Electrical Electronics Engineering. I have been working in [XXX] for 10 months.
After my undergraduate education, my ambition is to get further education but due to pandemic conditions, I postponed my abroad master degree plans and found a job. Now, pandemic conditions are getting better so I strongly believe it is a correct time to take a break from my business career and get the education that I always wanted.
I chose the Energy option as my core specialization in my undergraduate education. The courses that I took during my undergraduate education and also my final year project are completely related with these courses that will be given in this program. I would like to learn more about [XXX] and I believe this program offers best chances for me to improve myself.
In addition to my information which I have shared above, please consider my transcript and resume that I have uploaded for the application.
Thank you very much and I am looking forward to getting positive respond from you and be valuable addition in this program.
Sincerely,