[General] We are having very difficult times due to overcrowding

[bhatt]

Need a help to edit

We are having very difficult times due to overcrowding which includes lack of sleep, Poor hygiene practice, lack of privacy which effecting our physical and mental health.
Especially my son age 11 is sharing bed with me and I have god bad snoring problem
And he can not sleep well or can not wake up on time for school which effecting on his
Education badly.

 

[teechar]

"effect" is a noun.
"affect" is the verb.
Use "because I snore loudly".

 

[emsr2d2]

I need [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] your help. [STRIKE]to edit[/STRIKE] Please check my sentences for errors and correct them.

[STRIKE]We are having very difficult times due to[/STRIKE] Overcrowding is causing us difficulties, [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] including lack of sleep, poor hygiene, [STRIKE]practice,[/STRIKE] and a lack of privacy. [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] This is affecting our physical and mental health.

[STRIKE]Especially[/STRIKE] My son, aged 11, is suffering particularly badly because he [STRIKE]sharing[/STRIKE] shares a bed with me and I [STRIKE]have god bad snoring problem[/STRIKE] snore loudly.

[STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] He cannot sleep well or [STRIKE]cannot[/STRIKE] wake up on time for school, which is affecting [strike]on[/strike] his education badly.

Please note my corrections above.

I think you need to write simpler sentences - I'm not sure your English is at a level that allows you to try to construct these longer, more complicated sentences. Make sure you follow these basic rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with one, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".

 

[tedmc]

Where is the overcrowding?

 

[bhatt]

Flat is overcrowding,thank you

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

"effect" is a noun.
"affect" is the verb. . . .

In this context, yes. More generally, either one can be a noun or a verb.

Your comment is good. I just want Bhatt to know that the words have several uses.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

I need [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] help editing.

We are having very difficult times due to overcrowding, which includes lack of sleep, poor hygiene practices, and a lack of privacy, which is affecting our physical and mental health.

[STRIKE]Especially [/STRIKE]My son, age eleven, is sharing a bed with me, and I have a bad snoring problem, so he cannot sleep well or [STRIKE]can not[/STRIKE] wake up on time for school, which is affecting [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] his education badly.

I hope that helps.

 

[emsr2d2]

Our flat is [STRIKE]overcrowding[/STRIKE] overcrowded. Thank you.

Note my corrections above.