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    Please correct the sentence

    Hi

    I am writing a note on "a insurance company" in which the meaning of the note is as we are selling insurance service. I wrote this one but i m not satisfy with it please tell me how can i give proper mean to it. It must be grammetically right and meaning must be in sense of selling insurance services.

    I wrote :

    "Bartlett Actuarial Group, captive insurance company and risk retention group insures all or part of the risks of its parent. Looking for insurance company? Contact immediately!"

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    Arrow Re: Please correct the sentence

    sorry, from the sentence I am not getting the idea how to correct. better luck somewhere, have a nice day

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    Re: Please correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by sumitt_2004 View Post
    Hi

    I am writing a note on "a insurance company" in which the meaning of the note is as we are selling insurance service. I wrote this one but i m not satisfy with it please tell me how can i give proper mean to it. It must be grammetically right and meaning must be in sense of selling insurance services.

    I wrote :

    "Bartlett Actuarial Group, captive insurance company and risk retention group insures all or part of the risks of its parent. Looking for insurance company? Contact immediately!"
    I don't know what a CAPTIVE insurance company is. Please check that is the word you want to use to describe your company. I changed PARENT to CLIENTS.

    Revision:
    Bartlett Actuarial Group, a captive insurance company and risk-retention group, insures all or part of the risks of its clients. Looking for an insurance company? Contact us.

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