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    Smile is this okay- any valid suggestions?

    Original usage:
    The name of a newly added user cannot repeat that of an existing user.
    The name of a new user must be unique.
    Reason :It is redundant when written as newly added user.

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    Re: is this okay- any valid suggestions?

    Your phraseology looks fine to me. I agree that "newly added" is redundant, but keep in mind that quite often written instructions or directions are purposely redundant in order to be as explicit as possible.

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