rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Monday, September 27th, 2021. Penelope refocussed her attention from her surroundings to herself. She had noticed that words popped into her head as she needed them; she obviously still had complete language skills. She only lacked the ability to form words when trying to remember personal details and where she came from, but she somehow knew those words would come, eventually. Penelope looked down; she was wearing boots, hiking boots, and long pants made of robust cotton, as was her shirt. She concluded that she must have been out hiking when something happened to her. She checked her pockets: nothing, no wallet, and no identification. The clothes were almost new. She realised she was wearing a backpack and took it off, hoping she’d find something that would identify her. There was a journal. It only had a few entries, and the first entry was dated Tuesday, August 10th, 2021. It said, “Arrived back at Uni; I hope Dad is careful he’s just as bad as I am when it comes to trying something new and driving that car is definitely new. Dad called to let me know he arrived back home safely”. While she read the Journal, she remembered that she had felt something around her waist under her shirt. Penny looked under her shirt; it was a type of belt pouch.
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Monday, September 27th, 2021. Penelope refocussed her attention from her surroundings to herself. She had noticed that words popped into her head as she needed them; she obviously still had complete language skills. She only lacked the ability to form words when trying to remember personal details and where she came from, but she somehow knew those words would come, eventually. Penelope looked down; she was wearing boots, hiking boots, and long pants made of robust cotton, as was her shirt. She concluded that she must have been out hiking when something happened to her. She checked her pockets: nothing, no wallet, and no identification. The clothes were almost new. She realised she was wearing a backpack and took it off, hoping she’d find something that would identify her. There was a journal. It only had a few entries, and the first entry was dated Tuesday, August 10th, 2021. It said, “Arrived back at Uni; I hope Dad is careful he’s just as bad as I am when it comes to trying something new and driving that car is definitely new. Dad called to let me know he arrived back home safely”. While she read the Journal, she remembered that she had felt something around her waist under her shirt. Penny looked under her shirt; it was a type of belt pouch.
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