I try to express my enthusiasm for a position in my cover letter

[shania117]

In my cover letter, I try to express my enthusiasm for a position; do these statements sound like this?

....I would be honored to join the " ", which is dedicate to address challenges of child digital development. A community like yours, with a commitment to diversity and inclusiveness, is one of the most ambitious places to devote my responsibilities contributing the global perspectives on children’s internet safety, to make the world a better place for them. My desire to be a member of the community stems from the fact that the research project for which I am applying is clearly relevant to my primary research interests, and I would like to be a part of a research group that contributes to community knowledge of child digital life development and safety.

 

[teechar]

....I would be honored to join the " ",

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