keannu
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- Dec 27, 2010
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
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- South Korea
Many people buy cigarettes only when they sell them, so they fill the country with cigarettes. Everyone knows that cigarettes are harmful to the body. Smoking is harmful, but smoke is more harmful.
When we smoke, our body's organs die one by one. It also lowers the probability that we can live healthily. We can see a picture of the side effects of smoking on the cigarette box, saying we shouldn't smoke, but people still smoke, so this method has made a vicious circle/cycle.
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Could you correct any mistakes above?
When we smoke, our body's organs die one by one. It also lowers the probability that we can live healthily. We can see a picture of the side effects of smoking on the cigarette box, saying we shouldn't smoke, but people still smoke, so this method has made a vicious circle/cycle.
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Could you correct any mistakes above?