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I have chosen an IELTS practice writing topic. Please check the essay and correct any mistakes.
Topic: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that high school programmes should include compulsory volunteering service, such as teaching or helping our neighbourhood. However, I disagree with this idea, because it could discourage students to help others and add burden to students.
Those compulsory volunteering services may exhaust students and make them feel anxious. Students nowadays have a lot of homework to do and many of them have to take extra tutoring classes to improve their academic results, especially senior students, because some of them want to get into a good university. If the volunteering services are mandatory, it reduces their study time and they may be worried that they don’t have enough time to study. What is worse, it makes some students stay up late to work on their homework, which affects their health.
Some low-income students want to do part-time jobs to earn money during high school. If they have to spend extra time to do volunteering jobs, they will have difficult to live and have very limited time to study. Some may therefore be tired of doing free jobs, and treat them as troublesome works which cannot benefit our society. As they may grow hatred for this, they will not do any similar things in future when they have graduated. Also, if those students cannot earn their living, they will require more subsidy from schools or the government.
In conclusion, I think making unpaid community service compulsory does not benefit our students and society, because it affects students’ study and discourage them from doing helpful work in future.
Topic: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that high school programmes should include compulsory volunteering service, such as teaching or helping our neighbourhood. However, I disagree with this idea, because it could discourage students to help others and add burden to students.
Those compulsory volunteering services may exhaust students and make them feel anxious. Students nowadays have a lot of homework to do and many of them have to take extra tutoring classes to improve their academic results, especially senior students, because some of them want to get into a good university. If the volunteering services are mandatory, it reduces their study time and they may be worried that they don’t have enough time to study. What is worse, it makes some students stay up late to work on their homework, which affects their health.
Some low-income students want to do part-time jobs to earn money during high school. If they have to spend extra time to do volunteering jobs, they will have difficult to live and have very limited time to study. Some may therefore be tired of doing free jobs, and treat them as troublesome works which cannot benefit our society. As they may grow hatred for this, they will not do any similar things in future when they have graduated. Also, if those students cannot earn their living, they will require more subsidy from schools or the government.
In conclusion, I think making unpaid community service compulsory does not benefit our students and society, because it affects students’ study and discourage them from doing helpful work in future.
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