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    • Join Date: Jan 2004
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    #1

    Errors, teachers?

    Hello teachers,

    The sentence below sounds a bit weird altho I could not fathom out what is wrong with it. Could you please help?

    "My result broke record to be the highest for the first time in 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursueing."

    Thanks so much in advance. :)
    Regards,
    Kenneth


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
    • Posts: 19,434
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    Re: Errors, teachers?

    "My result broke record to be the highest for the first time in 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursueing."

    My result broke the record by being the highest for 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursuing

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