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    • Join Date: Jan 2006
    • Posts: 6
    #1

    Please correct my letter

    Subject: Salary Increment

    Dear Sir,
    I have been employed here as a Designer since 3rd April,2005 During this time I have discharged my duties to the best of my abilities. I have been sincerely dedicated and have constantly worked hard. I have been committed to my job, and have sought to achieve management's objectives.

    However, I have not received any salary increment, bonus. So, I now request for a reasonable increment in salary. I humbly request you to look on my request and do the needful.

    Anticipating favorable replay

    Thanking you,
    sk


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
    • Posts: 3
    #2

    Re: Please correct my letter

    for starters, discharge--> execute
    increment--> raise

    those are most glaring


    • Join Date: Jan 2006
    • Posts: 6
    #3

    Re: Please correct my letter

    Thanks for your help

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