hi all, can somebody here give good example about formal letter. the title is Request for a new notebook
i'll try to draft it...need your help to check it in term of grammar, wording and etc2..
Subject : Request for a new notebook
The matter above is referred
I start join this company last year on November 2005. Since that date, Iím using IBM R40, which has a lot of problem like a blue screen, and battery cannot stay for longer period (only about 5 minutes).
In October last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already report to helpdesk but they cannot do anything because the notebook is out of warranty.
For your information, I already sent the same request before this notebook totally corrupted. Unfortunately, no action has been taken to rectify this problem.
Your attention is highly appreciated.
I am looking forward to hear form you.
hmm..is it ok?