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    What is wrong with this paragraph

    Every year when may rolls around, my family and I all go to Orlando for our annual family reunion. Three days full of fun and assignment, for everyone to enjoy. Activities for the young and old no one never gets bored. Filled with fun and laughter. Each year we have a good time.

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    Re: What is wrong with this paragraph

    may- May
    Three days full of fun and assignment, for everyone to enjoy. / Filled with fun and laughter.- Neither of these are complete sentences.

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