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I'm wondering about the use of "as well as" in place of "and" near the end of a list. For example, I recently read the sentence:
Some additional tasks have included providing a market study, supplying a cost analysis and budget breakdown, as well as providing a Gantt chart.
I find the use of "as well as" awkward here, and would be more inclined to put "...budget breakdown, and providing a Gantt chart."
Is there a grammatical or style concern with this usage of "as well as"? This is from a paper that I am marking and I would like to know if I should suggest making changes, particularly since I have been finding this usage very common throughout the papers that I mark.
Thanks for any suggestions.
Some additional tasks have included providing a market study, supplying a cost analysis and budget breakdown, as well as providing a Gantt chart.
I find the use of "as well as" awkward here, and would be more inclined to put "...budget breakdown, and providing a Gantt chart."
Is there a grammatical or style concern with this usage of "as well as"? This is from a paper that I am marking and I would like to know if I should suggest making changes, particularly since I have been finding this usage very common throughout the papers that I mark.
Thanks for any suggestions.