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Topic: In Cambodia, parents arrange marriage for their children, in your opinion what are the advantages and disadvantages of the arranged marriage.
Choosing husband or wife is one of the most important decisions of everyone’s life because marriage can bring a happy life and unhappy life. In many countries in the word especially in Western countries a man or woman can choose their own partner; however, in some countries in Asia like Cambodia parents arrange their children’s marriage. Such decision can have both advantages and disadvantages.
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Choosing a husband or wife is one of the most important decisions in life. The wrong choice can mean the difference between a happy or miserable future. In many countries in the world, particularly in the West men and women choose their own partner. In Cambodia and many other eastern countries parents arrange their children’s marriage. This practise can have advantages and disadvantages.