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    #1

    Please correct this sentence

    Kindly correct the following sentence

    Upon contact the supplier,they refused to do so due to nonpayment

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    #2

    Re: Please correct this sentence

    It's unclear- what did they refuse to do?

    On contacting the supplier, they refused to send more (???) due to nonpayment.

    Or

    The supplier refused to send more...


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    #3

    Re: Please correct this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by JRD View Post
    Kindly correct the following sentence

    Upon contact the supplier,they refused to do so due to nonpayment
    How about this:

    The supplier refused to negotiate for a new contract with us due to our failing to meet financial obligations.

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