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    Please check and reply

    Hello,

    I'm new member and learning English writing and speaking. Please check my below paragraph and let me know my mistake.

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    When I woke up in the morning and saw outside from the bedroom window and found that there was a heavy rain. Then I decided to work from home, as weather condition was not good for drive. But it was really beautiful weather, because it was heavy ran with good temperature. "

    Thanks
    DJ

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    Re: Please check and reply

    Quote Originally Posted by dkjain1976 View Post
    Hello,

    I'm new member and learning English writing and speaking. Please check my below paragraph and let me know my mistake.

    "
    When I woke up in the morning and saw outside from the bedroom window and found that there was a heavy rain. Then I decided to work from home, as weather condition was not good for drive. But it was really beautiful weather, because it was heavy ran with good temperature. "

    Thanks
    DJ
    In the morning when I woke, I looked from my bedroom window and saw that it was raining heavily. I decided to work from home as the weather made it hazardous to drive. Although it was raining heavily it was very pleasant as it was not cold.


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    Re: Please check and reply

    Thanks for your reply.

    Why did u write like " It was ranning heavily " can we not write " It was heavy rain ?? If yes then why no then also why?

    Please advice

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