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    #1

    please check

    Hello Teacher
    Please see if the following is apprehensible and appreciate your correction / re-composition.
    "I am ashamed that I am not here to do my share of running about for our parents but thank God that he sends an angel whom you are, can and would."
    Thank you.

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    Re: please check

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    I am ashamed that I am not there to do my share of running about for our parents, but thank God that he sent an angel like you who can and will.
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