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    I need a help pls

    Dear teacher.. I really find it hard to understand how to write,, and if i do write,, i do make lots of mistake in my write-up..Could you pls give me an advice on how to overcome these issue..

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    #2

    Re: I need a help pls

    Put a paragraph of you writing up and we'll look at it. Your punctuation is wrong- you are using ,, when it should be ,. What sort of writing tasks do you have?

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    Question Re: I need a help pls

    Sir,
    In respect to your demand being sent to me, that, I should send official report about the problem we are having over here.Could you please kindly grant my officials and I some more time to see if we'll be able to solve the problem, and if not, I'll write and let you know.
    I do hope my appeal will be put to consideration.I'am hoping to hear from you soon.

    Thanks
    Yours faithfully
    micky mike.

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    #4

    Re: I need a help pls

    1 Do myou know the person's name? Where possible, use a name.
    2 Don't use contractions at all- use I will not I'll.
    3 'and if not, I'll write andlet you know' This seems a bit confusing to me. I'd take it out as your are writing to request more time.
    4 I am hoping to hear from you soon.- I would use a forumal like 'Thanking you in advance, I looe forward to hearing from you'.

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    Re: I need a help pls

    James,
    In respect to your demand being sent to me, that, I should send an official report about what happend between John and phillip. My official and I, have come to agreement, to solve the issue. If we cannot solve the issue, then I will inform you officially.
    Thanking you in advance, I look forward to hearing from you.





    Yours faithfully
    micky mike

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    Re: I need a help pls

    Thanks, Tdol, I relly appreciate your kindness. Thanks alots for all your effort and contribution to my studies.

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    Re: I need a help pls

    Quote Originally Posted by micky mike View Post
    James,
    In respect to your demand being sent to me, that, I should send an official report about what happend between John and phillip. My official and I, have come to agreement, to solve the issue. If we cannot solve the issue, then I will inform you officially.
    Thanking you in advance, I look forward to hearing from you.


    Yours faithfully
    micky mike
    James- Dear James (unless he's a friend)
    to me, that- no comma
    happend - spelling
    John and phillip- capital letter for the second name
    My official and I, have- no comma
    come to agreement- an
    Yours faithfully- Yours faithfully,

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    Re: I need a help pls

    Quote Originally Posted by micky mike View Post
    Thanks, Tdol, I really appreciate your kindness. Thanks a lot for all your effort and contribution to my studies.
    You're welcome, Micky.

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    #9

    Re: I need a help pls

    dear james,
    in respect to your demand being sent to me that I should send an official report about what happen between John and Phillip. My official and i have come to an agreement to solve the issue. If we cannot solve the issue, then I will inform you officailly.
    Thanking you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully

    Mciky mike

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    #10

    Re: I need a help pls

    dear james,- Dear James
    in respect to your demand being sent to me that I should send an official report- With regard to your demand for an offical report about what happened, my official (what do you mean by this??) and I have come...
    If we cannot solve the issue,- This contradicts what you say in the previous sentence

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