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    Hi,

    Can someone correct it for me? It's for someone who's going to a congress of pediatric in the USA:

    Goals:
    Offering private service to the common patients and families, with respect, dignity,calmness and confidence. Exploring new strategies in order to encourage quality and identify the greatness of satisfaction of the parents in the PICU.

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    Re: Correction:

    [quote=ieasy;145080]Hi,

    Can someone correct it for me? It's for someone who's going to a congress of pediatric in the USA:

    Goals:
    To acquire knowledge and study innovative practise which will enable me to offer a professional and effective service to patients and their families with respect, dignity,calmness and confidence.

    To enable me to explore new strategies which will help to encompass a high quality delivery of care and identify areas of practise which can be developed to increase user satisfaction in the PICU/quote]

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