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Stephanie, I concur with you, there is unlimited advantages to having access to the Internet. I consume at least 95% of my job online and the advantage of being online to obtain price quotes via Internet. Having the luxury of hands-on contact World Wide is a major improvement. But, there are some disadvantages. Because there are unlimited amount of accessible information available, criminals’ activities occur, as well.
there is unlimited advantages- are
I consume at least 95% of my job online- you don't consume jobs- you could spend 95% of your working time
the advantage of being online- have the advantage
World Wide- worldwide
there are unlimited amount of accessible information- amounts