Results 1 to 3 of 3

    • Join Date: Jan 2007
    • Posts: 14
    #1

    please check if this is ok?

    I do not think this world is doing enough to tackle poverty and racism. You are maybe wondering why I have chosen to discuss issues relating to the above topic. The reason why I chose to talk about poverty and racism is because it is all around us, in my eyes they are very important issues that have not been addressed properly in the media. Some people may agree or disagree with my comments therefore I would like to remind readers that my opinions are not there to harm or offend anyone. My main objective is to inform readers about how we can help the needy and how we can stop racism affecting our lives.

  1. rancher247's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

    • Join Date: Jan 2007
    • Posts: 275
    #2

    Re: please check if this is ok?

    How formal is this writing supposed to be?
    Don't use "You are maybe wondering why..." or personal pronouns you/I if the writing is at all formal!


    • Join Date: Jan 2007
    • Posts: 14
    #3

    Re: please check if this is ok?

    thanks. yeah it is supposed to be formal writing. i have cut that bit out. and i have changed to: the reason why i chose...

Similar Threads

  1. Could you pls check?
    By smelvanzq in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 28-Jan-2007, 07:50
  2. check
    By navi tasan in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 04-Nov-2006, 01:10
  3. Can anyone check these names for me?
    By Bkk Kid in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 21-Aug-2006, 06:14
  4. Replies: 2
    Last Post: 30-Mar-2006, 06:27

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •