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    #1

    Please correct my text

    Dear experts,

    First of all sorry for my poor english.
    Please correct the following text:

    I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them.
    Two first-hand experiences:
    1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food.
    2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work.

    If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is.

    Thanks,
    Gabor


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    #2

    Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by arabiata View Post
    Dear experts,

    First of all sorry for my poor english.
    Please correct the following text:

    I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them.[who do you know?]
    Two first-hand experiences:
    1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food.
    2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work.

    If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is.

    Thanks,
    Gabor
    English

    Israel
    Arabs
    Jews
    Jewish

    anti-semitism

    who is Jewish


    Otherwise, grammatically it looks ok.

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    #3

    Re: Please correct my text

    Thank you for your help.

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