[quote=asad hussain;150895]Paraphrase (of the first three stanzas)
The poet walks the countryside alone imagining himself adrift. Then the reverie is broken by the sight of the daffodils caught in the gentle wind and the flowers appear to him to have taken on the form of lively dancers. This shock captures his spirits and he views the scene as a 'host', welcoming and uplifting. The daffodils seem to be as numerous as the stars that shine in the sky. They stretch endlessly along the shore, and though the waves of the lake dance beside the flowers, the daffodils overshadow the water in glee. The poet can’t help but be happy in such a joyful company of flowers. He stares and stares, but doesn’t realize what wealth the scene will bring him.
Your paraphrase is adorable for me. What with practicing my writing and what with my love for this poem, the following is my premature shot.
Like a lonly cloud floating high over valleys and hills, the speaker(in the poem) wandered in the countryside one day. Suddenly he came across a host of golden daffodils beside the lake and beneath the trees; they are fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Like the stars shining and twinkling endlessly on the Milky Way, they danced and tossed their heads gleefully along the shore of a bay.
The waves of the lake also danced, but the daffodils were more gleeful. He couldn't help but be happy with such pleasant company, but he didn't realize what benefits the show had brought to him then.
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