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    Kindly correct the following sentences


    "Please note that our sub-contractor has recently built some rooms near the main entrance and installed some compound wall lights as well, its also need more power as well as our portakabin.

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    Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    The problem is that it is a run-on sentence. Here's one possible fix, though maybe not the best one:

    "Please note that our sub-contractor has recently built some rooms near the main entrance and installed some compound wall lights as well. It also needs more power, as does our portakabin."

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