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    Post Sentence expansion

    eyes blazing and fangs gleaming ,the wolf stared at Wilma.
    The passerby saw the old man by the window shaking with sob.


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    Re: Sentence expansion

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    eyes blazing and fangs gleaming ,the wolf stared at Wilma.
    The passerby saw the old man by the window shaking with sob.
    who matters whether he is wilma's father or grandfather? and why he is crying?

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    Re: Sentence expansion

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    eyes blazing and fangs gleaming ,the wolf stared at Wilma.
    The passerby saw the old man by the window shaking with sob.
    Hello Unreg

    I'll expand the first sentence. Then see if you can expand the second, and we'll check it for you.

    1. The wolf's eyes blazed and its fangs gleamed as it stared at Wilma.

    Now you try!

    All the best,

    MrP

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