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    #1

    is this correct?

    To NY All Staff

    Weekly Studio Work Report is attached.
    Please take a look.
    Regards,

    Hiro

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    #2

    Re: is this correct?

    Hello Hiro

    It sounds a little brusque. You might say:

    ________________________________________

    To all New York staff:

    The weekly studio work report is attached.

    Please let me know if you need any more information.

    Regards,

    Hiro

    ________________________________________

    (Other members may have other suggestions.)

    All the best,

    MrP

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